cutting down tree is real environment threat yes this is still happening at a great rate around the world why do you think forests are being destroyed are there benefits from the destruction of forest | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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cutting down tree is real environment threat yes, this is still happening at a great rate around the world, why do you think forests are being destroyed are there benefits from the destruction of forest?

It has been a moot point of discussion -cutting down flora is better environment threat ,nevertheless, trees have been being cut by people,due to that, presently, there are enormous of problems are going on around the universal. This project have many causes relevant to environment and some profitable sustainability of living organisms.

To embark with, in this days population has been mushrooming by leaps and bounds, Owing to that, people demands and needs have significantly and remarkably incline. Therefore people need more space to build dwellings and proper infrastructure for living that why , trees are being cut down annually. In addition business tycoon get lot of profits through trees. They are cutting flora for build construction: shopping malls;Apartments ; new residency and sky scraper building. The epitome of furniture, people are fascinating a different type of furniture . Which are making from the tree it's useful for us, due to that, people are cutting down granary, it would be effective upon weather; global warming effect and pollution gradually increasing day to day life

On the other hand, deforestation problems is harmful for environment but some fruitful for people. Businessmen build a new high rise building and companies empty space , on account of that, plethora of opportunity to mitigate unemployment problems apart from that build handsome residency; hospital ;statues :statute of unity - which has built close to Narmada river, there are more water activities. People can enjoyable and whole area's see through chopper in nominal rates ,not only native come there and enjoy but, also foreigner come because of that, income and financial status improving helpful for the government

In conclusion, forests drop -down in yet time has positive impact upon people to get better facilities and live luxurious life although people should not forget the effects of cut down trees.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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...eople are cutting down granary, it would be effective upon weather; global warmin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45302013423 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87792563635 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.148294682 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.5 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161179538797 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589922986655 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541894195463 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102353772195 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483897792308 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments