Some people prefer to rise children in the cities while other believe that children should be rise in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In 21st century, competition has been increasing everyday, everyone wants their children growing in good weather. Some people reckon that to rice children in the town, however, others think that they ought to be rise in the rural. I will discuss both the view.
To embark with, some parents prefer to grow up their children in town, owing to some facilities : transportation ;Hospital; gymnastic and better education. First and foremost every parents want to their children learn in best school of area because education is the key of unlock the golden door of success. City side there are some enjoying places for children like Park, theatre and toy shop. They will be better prepare for a life in a real world career. For an example, in India many people migrate from rural to town such as Bangalore city - which is well known City for education, not only National Students but also foreigner come there to make their future become bright.
On the other hand, is a very important for child grow up in health environment. Children needs fresh air , not need polluted by the huge amount of car and factory of the modern city. They sped much time into exercising and walking with their friends, also parents will have more time to spend their children ,due to, no traffic jam problems and decreasing driving. The epitome of this, from last two years, people have been migrating countryside vis -a`- vis city side. They want to their children grow up in Silence place and serene atmosphere, it is helpful to children's mind make Sharp.
In conclusion in my opinion, I agree with those people who want to rise their children in cities compared to the countryside, plethora of opportunity to get Zenith of success in future. Moreover, notwithstanding, air pollution children's get better healthy life, due to some advanced medical equipment.
To conclude, there are many benefits children grow up in cities mainly help to their career become bright , but country sides provide fresh air environment and serene atmosphere owing to that, children's less chance to involved in disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95779220779 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54245493327 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4822071939 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300370051096 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104657643754 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717473455617 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20223106532 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675537328281 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.