The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the years 2000 and predicted population growth up to until 2050.
The graph illustrates how the population of Asian countries have changed since 2000 and they will be gradually changed in the future.
Overall, over the 50 years period, India is going to incline growth in its population and it will be overtake China, while population of China will pick in 2013 and then fall down.
To begin with, there were less population living in India then China such as 1billion and 1.25 billion. Between 2000 and 2010, Indian citizen had been rising 0.2 billion over the same time, residence of China has increased by 1.36 billion. We can see that chat, citizen of both Nations will incline in the next two decades, during 2010 to 2030.
According to chart, the chart shows that in 2030 both countries will have the same inhabitants like 1.45 billions ,after the residents of China will be declining slightly in next two decades and 1.4 billions will be in 2050, however Indian population will be incline and will get apex of citizen in 2050 like 1.6 billion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the same inhabitants like 1.45 billions ,after the residents of China will be dec...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... population will be incline and will get apex of citizen in 2050 like 1.6 billion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27915875479 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.6470238821 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213211133853 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115193854142 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768770704888 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147813379334 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579046759831 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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