The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the years 2000 and predicted population growth up to until 2050

Essay topics:

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the years 2000 and predicted population growth up to until 2050.

The line graph indicates the number of the population of two asian countries : India and China since the year 2000 to predicted growth untill 2050.

Overall, the most striking fact emerged from the line chart is that, the population of China was higher than inhabitants of India in first year (2000), while, it will be reversed in the predicted year (2050).

According to the chart, in 2000, 1 billion citizens in India ; 1.2 billions in China. After a decade, in 2010, the population of India was increased by 0.2 billion ; 0.1 billion in China. The figure of inhabitants will be similar between 1.4-1.5 billions in both of the countries China and India in the year 2030.

Moreover, the number of humans in India will significantly rise but in China, it will slightly decline till 2030 until 2050. In 2050, the population of India will reach at the peak (1.6 billion), however, the number of Chinese will be 1.4 billions, there will be a difference of 0.2 billion between both Nations.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o the chart, in 2000, 1 billion citizens in India ; 1.2 billions in China. After ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49530281439 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7830853197 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361958357986 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202062724336 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135446326405 0.0843802449381 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275751796928 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143720529188 0.0819641961636 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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