Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop doing physical exercise? What can be done to solve this problem?
In this 21st century, the pivotal role has been played by the sports, which are include all forms of competitive physical activities. Many individuals take a part in sport, when they are children. However, when they are becoming adults, they stop participation in sport. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of many adults, who stop doing physical recreations and the preventive solutions for this issue.
On one hand, there are multitude of sport games : football; volleyball; cricket and many more, which are considered as the physical ativities, although, mankind play sport until childhood and do not take a part when their enter in adulthood. There are plethora of causes behind this problem. In childhood, human beings do not have any kind of social responsibilities but when they become a mature, due to job; family responsibilities and social life, they are not incure the time for sport games. Another reason is lack of support from parents to their offspring. For an instance, owing to the poor mentality of parents, thay think that, there is a no career in sport field, accordingly, they encourage their kids to focus on academics, which diverts the interest of youngsters from sport, which has physical recreations.
On the other hand, there are many preventive solutions to deal with the issue of adults, who are not able to incure the time for playing sports. Academic institutes should add the subject of sport, which assists to to develop the interest of teenagers in sport and make a career as a sport person and athlete. Government ought to encourage people by tagging banners, introducing advertise on television. Also companies, where humans are working, are responsible. For an example, one of the european countries - Germany, where it is sine-qua-non for all organisations to allocate some days for sport event, in which all the employees can participate because it keeps safe from stress and burden of work, not only that but also keep body healthy.
To conclude, on account of less encouragement and support to adults, they stop playing sports, which contain physical exercise, although, as long as companies and schools have to organise sport events and authors ought to encourage people about sports by advertising upon television and holdings.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...as been played by the sports, which are include all forms of competitive physical activ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... to the poor mentality of parents, thay think that, there is a no career in sport fie...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...add the subject of sport, which assists to to develop the interest of teenagers in sp...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s, introducing advertise on television. Also companies, where humans are working, ar...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15363881402 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81689455848 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4472820941 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309212889199 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110771458812 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939490239872 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205156592135 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115177421911 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...as been played by the sports, which are include all forms of competitive physical activ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... to the poor mentality of parents, thay think that, there is a no career in sport fie...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...add the subject of sport, which assists to to develop the interest of teenagers in sp...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s, introducing advertise on television. Also companies, where humans are working, ar...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15363881402 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81689455848 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4472820941 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309212889199 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110771458812 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939490239872 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205156592135 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115177421911 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.