Some people prefer to rise children in the cities while other believe that children should be rise in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To embark with, some parents prefer to grow up their children in town, owing to some facilities : transportation ;Hospital; gymnastic and better education. First and foremost every parents want to their children learn in best school of area because education is the key of unlock the golden door of success. City side there are some places enjoyment for children like Park, theatre and toy shop. They will be better prepare for a life in a real world career. For an example, in India many people migrate from rural to town such as Bangalore city - which is well known City for education, not only National Students but also foreigner come there to make their future become bright.
On the other hand, is a very important for child grow up in health environment. Children needs fresh air , not need polluted by the huge amount of car and factory of the modern city. They sped much time into exercising and walking with their friends, also parents will have more time to spend their children ,due to, traffic jam problems and decreasing driving. The epitome of this, from last two years, people have been migrating countryside vis -a`- vis city side. They want their children grow up in Silence place and serene atmosphere, it is helpful to children's mind make Sharp.
To conclude, in my opinion, I agree with those people who want to rise their children in cities compared to the countryside, plethora of opportunity to get Zenith of success in future. Moreover, notwithstanding, air pollution children's get better healthy life, due to some advanced medical equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58010302981 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0207531688 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237496078965 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084645910391 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473469053856 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165366569164 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280260284663 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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