Global Warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue

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Global Warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Nowadays,weather has been having high degree of heat ,Owing to some gizmos;automobiles and deforestation. Global worming effect is one of the most hazardous problems that the world is cladding yet . There are some causes of global heating and some quintessential straps should take by government and individuals to challenge the issue.

To embark with, global warming is the long -life heating of earth climate system ,due to ,human activities -human use fossil fuel in vehicles and the smoke of vehicles increase heat - trapping problems on atmosphere. moreover cutting down tree is direct effects on atmosphere. Global Warming happens when carbon dioxide and other air pollutants effects on see level . For an example, people are using a electrical items : air conditioner and refrigerator, inside there gizmos use a HFC gas - hydro fluorocarbons it is effect on ozone layer and directly drop upon Earth, Owing to that, people suffer In lot of diseases : Zombie,Cholera, Eyes problems.

On the other hand , there some preventive measure of defense global temperature. Individuals should utilize granary and plans to make ozone layer stronger . Apart from that , people ought to use public transport compared to own vehicle, save fuel and decline air pollution. Moreover government ought to Increase price of fossil fuel and give advice use CFC gas - Chlorofluorocarbons use In gizmos. For an Evidence , the government of India more focus On plantation, fuels, less air pollution and less uses of harmful gas because of that, ozone layer become stronger and less patent vis - a- vis other nations.

To conclusion, people should use public transport and companies are less using hazardous gas due to that, people can control global hitting and stop the diseases which made by the global warming.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34275618375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00914244198 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2061510577 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.307692308 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154331367559 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631358864401 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633488614006 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103001466808 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475863730669 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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