Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement??
In these days, every government invests money on such things , which is fruitful for the people who are living in particular states. The government spend significant amount from budget on some things : arts; music and theater is waste of money, while government ought to invest these found upon public services. I partially agree with the given statement.
To begin with,there are several reason for spending large part of money on public services. First and foremost hospital, roads , schools and these things determine quality of life the most of us will have. Moreover, government ought to expense upon education system, because the foundation of any clever country its education system. For an example, people are suffering from corona pandemic . The government of India is spending 1500 billion upon corona diseases, owing to that, lot of people recovered vis`-a -vis other nations. If government would not spend money on this diseases ,the health of people might decline.
On the other hand, government should not neglected arts music and theater. These are institutions related to arts and music not spent much money by government. Government ought to invests on them , because these are the thing without, people become uncomfortable. Arts and music through people not only feel relax but also control some diseases : stress, anxiety and people feel came. For epitome of this, in previous years government organized drawing compilation for who were not speak , they explained hole things through their drawing and their paintings bought by businessmen over the world in millions dollars.
To conclude, there are clear benefits ensuring spend large amount of money on public service, but can not neglected arts and music , these are part of people life for enjoyment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, in particular, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34519572954 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56311477637 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.314893034 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298505701992 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107061369542 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715925603555 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194645314165 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085046173176 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.