The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by In two countries

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by In two countries.

The bar chart indicate information about proportion of qualifier who takes science qualification in two Nation :Singapore and Malaysia.

Overall ,in both Nation no modification in science is the highest in the chart ,while ,the lower student qualification into masters degree in science .
To begin with, in this chat significantly difference in proportion of student having a science degree in different level. For bachelors course people of Singapore having a (20%) in bachelor's degree compared to double of Malaysia. In addition, for master qualification significant decline vis -a`-vis to bachelors such as Malaysia and Singapore just 3% of science qualification it is a lower students take master degree.
Furthermore most of the both countries peoples 9 qualification science is the minimal shows in the chart like Malaysia 65 %not modification and Singapore less 5% of Malaysia. Finally school leaving exam is the second pick up student qualifiers more than half quarter not Malaysia but also Singapore 30% and 35 % .

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...alaysia but also Singapore 30% and 35 % .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, second, so, while, in addition, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.97073170732 453% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47798742138 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16584832879 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.253228098 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230198276697 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11665645168 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10967916802 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172292529454 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964294976987 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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