Many museum charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many museum charge for admission while others are free.

Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages.

Museum is the very interesting place and some people can get knowledge of the ancient things of the specific reason. While, the admission charges is taken by museums for different purposes . I believe that, it is the positive things to get some amount of charges.

Firstly, museum is a place, where many local people, student and tourist are coming to visit and get knowledge about the past culture and monument build by the ancient people. However, it is compulsory to pay charge by museum because of the museum also change direction to attract the visitors. The maintenance also requires keeping the all things to clean and attractive. For instance, the exhibition also held by the museum to provide knowledge about past culture to the people in future.

Secondly, if the museum comity allow to people free for the entry then all kind of people visit again and again. Because of the reason value of the museum goes downward. Adding that, it is also disturb the visitor came from other country and history lovers. The biggest disadvantage is that local community disturbs the environment of museum with negative aspects. For example, they create the disturbing and damage the valuable ancient model and things.

To sum up, I would like to say that the some amount of entrance fees should be compulsory. However they have own maintenance and new creativity. While the some amount of relaxation for the student visitor hardly to pay own self. It clear seen that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01593625498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54803623642 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1369270995 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6875 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342381770637 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102765613078 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109854043337 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183901673621 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530841853682 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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