Many museum charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
In our contemporary society , the most of entertainments and scientific centers have imposed enter fees , although these facilities are allocated to public by government’s budget. While there are some drawbacks of this debate, I personally believe that the benefits which are offered by this notion , are more remarkable . This essay will put force to give some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion .
First and foremost , the biggest profit which will brought by getting admission fee is the amount of money which will be accumulated. Despite the fact that , the budget of these areas are supplied by the government , entrance money can devote to maintain extra facilities. Making the surrounding area of musume more desireable , addition some facilities for tempting people to visit museum , these are good illustration of this issue.
In addition to above argument , innately if people have to pay money for a result , they will pay more attention to the value of that thing. When facilities are accessed for free , people have had less enthusiasm to use as compare unavailable entertainment. Thereby expensive things are of greater significant for human .
Furthermore, not only can the amount of earned money be used for boosting facilities, but also it can allocate to buying precious ancient for museums . For instance, the liquidity for baying masterpieces artwork and advertising in broadcast to persuading people to visit there. Therefore , the popularity of the museums can be lifted a great deal larger.
In conclusion, the positive impacts of getting admission fees are negligible and in different ways can encourage people to paying more attention to this healthy entertainment .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40449438202 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03533993714 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8200785442 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194467665182 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687843911604 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505769174729 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104077250508 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597967234401 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.