Many museums charge for admission while other are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweight the disadvantages?
The existence of museums in a country play an irreplaceable role. The museums provide an alternative to society both education and recreation. However, it raised the question about whether the museums should charge an entering fees or give a free pass. From a personal perspective, the entrance fees might survive museums from economic crisis and increase the quality of museums.
The museums are a part of public services. We can say beyond any doubt that governments must take this responsibility even though it is a support facilities and is not a major facilities such as schools or hospitals. The parks, for example, are funded by governments that facilitate the citizens in order that people have recreation area in their neighbourhood. In addition, setting retributions might affect a number of visitors. This can be attributed to the fact that people are more economical in this modern era. On holiday season, for instance, almost twice as many people visit parks or beaches than theme parks. Hence, if retributions is implemented, visitors might leave museums as holiday spot in the next day.
Apart from those reasons, governments do not have sufficient money to fund everything. There are others aspect which have priority such as education, health, and infrastructure. By way of illustration, primary and secondary schools get huge allocations because it is a foundation of development; besides, there are an increase significantly infrastructure cost in every year. Consequently, the museums get little money of this shares and it will be difficult to survive. Moreover, the museums need extra money. One reason for this is that they need to update the galleries, and provide special guides for improving attractions. Research carried out by survey data center in London shows that the major reason of visitor went to the museum due to new attractions and highly recommended exhibitions. If there is no update features, people will be bored and they leave gradually in spite of its free. Thus, charge for entering will not only enhance the quality of museum but also gain visitors interesting.
Having looked at both sides, setting the entrance fees brings essential benefits for museums and visitors outweight the drawbacks.
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Essay evaluation report
The existence of museums in a country play an irreplaceable role.
The existence ....plays an irreplaceable role.
The museums provide an alternative to society both education and recreation.
The museums provide an alternative to society both on education and on recreation.
it is a support facilities
it is a supporting facility
if retributions is implemented
if retributions are implemented
there are an increase significantly infrastructure cost in every year.
there is a significant increase on infrastructure cost every year.
Sentence: There are others aspect which have priority such as education, health, and infrastructure.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and aspect
Sentence: Having looked at both sides, setting the entrance fees brings essential benefits for museums and visitors outweight the drawbacks.
Error: outweight Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 358 350
No. of Characters: 1836 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.35 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.128 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.834 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.048 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.313 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.444 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...a support facilities and is not a major facilities such as schools or hospitals. The parks...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...uently, the museums get little money of this shares and it will be difficult to surv...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2875 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.1475 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0725 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0225 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0275 0.0403226058552 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95892207984 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0025 0.00163938923432 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.105 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025 0.021408717616 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.005 0.011925033212 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2246.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27374301676 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40782122905 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296089385475 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203910614525 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142458100559 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95892207984 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 67.7252769221 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0476190476 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8121439101 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.952380952 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.6565575951 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.09523809524 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326023125562 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0962695750583 0.102741220458 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0549629018944 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.45026112646 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173291992245 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116541098078 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591633366841 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250610727344 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0737826052051 0.0638462369009 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219601919453 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262736713046 0.058150111329 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 1.9629258517 357% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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