The issue of whether or not government should charge for money in some public places has been heatedly discussed topic in recent years, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Some people believe that museums should pay for entering while others do not agree. Personally speaking, I would assert that the disadvantages of doing that is outweigh its advantage.
Admittedly, pay for admission of museums can benefit the atmosphere in the museum because only people who really want to learn something from it will spend the money on that. For instance, if the cost of admission is ten bucks per people, there will be fewer people who just want to find a place to take rest walk into the museum directly and affect others who are admiring those values. Since all people in the museum pay attention to these treasures, the atmosphere of learning will be better; then, the government will spend more to built museums for those people who enjoy learning something in them. However, this does not necessarily mean that spending on admission for going into museum is a constructive thing.
In fact, charging money will reduce amount of people to go to the museum and result in citizens’ poor educational level. Although there are some people go to the museum for taking rest, there still people who want to see those exhibits. However, some proletariats cannot afford the admission of museum, which makes them lose those knowledges in the museum. For example, if a person who only earn 100 dollars per week, he will always not spend 10 dollars for going to the museum. After that, since all proletariats in a society do not have money to pay the admission, they will receive less knowledges in their daily lives and the educational level of the whole society will decrease indirectly.
In conclusion, both of the two view are acceptable, but still, I maintain that museum should be free to all people, as its positive effects outweigh the rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not government should charge for money in s...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...that the disadvantages of doing that is outweigh its advantage. Admittedly, pay for adm...
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Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun knowledges is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...to pay the admission, they will receive less knowledges in their daily lives and the...
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Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...whole society will decrease indirectly. In conclusion, both of the two view are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85885885886 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49799674449 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0582791583 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380938557948 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152714476146 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642996382994 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222790414294 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708061633779 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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