Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, with the development of world, art and history are considered as the precious values in the society and museums are the places which include these values. Many visitors have to spend money for entry whereas others can visit freely. In my opinion, the benefits of require paid ticket in museums outbalance the drawbacks.
On the one hand, charging money of people wishing to visit museums can bring about some shortcomings. First and foremost, this action can reduce the proportion of people visiting. Because individuals have to allocate budgets to the entry, they are less motivated to come to museums which is the regular thought of human. Moreover, with the decrease in visitors, the popularity of museums will decline significantly. In addition, this change requires more employees for museums, for instance, accountants, ticker checkers, more securities are needed which lead to more salaries paid. As a result, there are some disadvantages when people are allowed to pay for entering museums.
On the other hand, although drawbacks of charging people for admission are easily foreseen, the plus points of It is more significant. Most importantly, allowing visitors to spend money when coming to museums can raise the financial for museum administrators. This amount of money may be used for repairing or refurbishment for building or facilities of museums. Another factor, requested payment can enhance respect of citizens for art and historical items. When art and history in some places are taken for granted, the awareness of values of these fields is absolutely essential and this would be a big contribution for not only artists and history keepers but also the whole communities. Last but not least, this financial fund can provide much more payment for people working in art and history fields to motivate them to work harder and create a great deal of more wonderful pieces.
In conclusion, disadvantages of required payment for visitors to museums can be denied but the benefits of it can lead to many others positive consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
... awareness of values of these fields is absolutely essential and this would be a big contribution fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24773413897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81988526447 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534743202417 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9785103772 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308048733183 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106527443756 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613560865684 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1956426565 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356398366321 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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