Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is true that almost all museums do not require entrance fee but visitors need to defray tickets for entering in some places. While such phenomenon has possessed some demerits, I support the view that it is likely to have positive effects on generations at that nations.
A number of disadvantages have been associated with expenditure for museum’s admission. It would circumscribe the number of visitors going to museum. In several areas, museum can not attract manifold generations, especially the young ones because it is not an entertainment center which serves mostly their amusements so entrance fees would be the second barrier stagnates the tourism to historic elements. Consequently, the cost of maintaining ancient sculptures or exploring new historic discoveries would eclipse the revenue from selling tickets and museum would be closed providing that no sponsors or governments readily supply money, finally.
Notwithstanding, I would argue that the merits of charging for entering museums overshadow the foregoing disadvantages. Firstly, the authorities of museums have opportunities to extend the boundary by exhibiting manifold kinds of art, not only historic documents or items. The more people enjoy the event they organize, the more sponsor or private companies would be attracted to invest for the museum. Secondly, it has attributed to the education in beneficial ways which the awareness of history could be raised by residents for the reason that the amount of money they spent on would remind them that history has its own merits which is priceless.
In conclusion, paying for tickets to entrance museums, albeit their drawbacks, I still believe that that way is advantageous for not only the museum but also the education of that nation
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40072202166 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98655250885 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1543001312 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223211624314 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927440561699 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573316671709 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138767905477 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346298395716 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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