Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Numerous criminals commit crimes again after spending time in prison. This issue has caused many difficulties for communities around the world. This essay will analyze the reasons why ex-prisoners go back to crime and offer some solutions.
There are some reasons why offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Firstly, they do not have job opportunities, and that results in them being unemployed. To elaborate, some employers do not want to hire criminals in their companies because these managers worry about others' safety. Secondly, the majority of offenders never received an education when they were young. Therefore, they have misbehaved, in particular, they cannot control themselves before acting, and that is the root of making wrong decisions.
However, there are several measures to tackle this problem, and offenders can still change their lives for the better. And to deal with unemployment, the government should create more full-time work to raise the monthly income for ex-offenders. As a result, when they obtain a work-life balance, they may look after their family and especially themselves. Additionally, they will probably be able to pay for services, such as healthcare, education for their children, and insurance. Furthermore, to solve a lack of education, the government should offer rehabilitation programs to wrongdoers in prison to educate ex-prisoners because it will raise their awareness and make them think twice before they commit a crime again. During rehabilitation, they will learn about legislation and how to enforce the law seriously. Besides, they will know that they have to do meaningful and helpful activities for society.
In conclusion, ex-offenders are a controversial issue that is very relevant to contemporary society. Nonetheless, the best remedy to resolve this problem is to create more employment for ex-offenders because they need money to live and take care of their family. If ex-prisoners become good people, they will society will recognize their responsibility to be good citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80913365224 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 317.0 20.2975951904 1562% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1706.0 106.682146367 1599% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 317.0 20.7667163134 1526% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 165.0 7.06120827912 2337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219854917117 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219854917117 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145735993314 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548220440014 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.4 13.0946893788 1240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -258.74 50.2224549098 -515% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.29 8.58950901804 271% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.8 10.1190380762 1273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 129.0 10.7795591182 1197% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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