Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history.However people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones, because people and offices. How important is the maintenance of old buildings? Should history stand the way of progress?
Every society has some ancient buildings which are preserved and protected by local governments due to their historical value. They stand as monuments making people feel proud, as of their past. Although, the demand for land is increasing for the development of residential areas and once premises, this essay does not support the idea of destroying old buildings, for they can help to preserve the cultural identity and history of a nation.
The first reason for preserving Old building is their ability to maintain the cultural identity of a nation. More than material prosperity, people generally take pride in their past, as members of a culture. As such, traditional buildings, which are considered as monuments of a country, represent the glory of a period in the past. A good example to illustrate this point is The Taj Mahal in india, constructed during the times of the Mughals, which stands as a historical monument.
The second reason is the amount of revenue these monuments can generate, when tourism is on the increase everywhere. Palaces, forts, temples, churches, mosques and memorials attract visitors. These buildings also help other business opportunities to flourish. For example, the Tower of London, the Leaning Tower of Pisa, the Pyramids of Egypt and the Cathedral of Cologne have paved the way for the development of these areas. The presence historic buildings offers an example. Thus, tourism and allied industries provide opportunities* for the development of the economy.
In short, the preservation of monuments of the past is* a matter of national dignity. The destruction of historic buildings of a country of a country would sound the death knell of its culture.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, thus, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22262773723 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87338480575 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.116687301 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18012586956 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577599209435 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528248037118 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107660778683 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414921758163 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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