Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.
Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
Today, Education is the most important thing for our life. In Sri Lanka education free for all kids. The Sri Lankan education is very high level education for compare to another country. I think children have enough education at school.
Sri Lankan education is very high education than I think extra lasses or weekend classes doesn’t want to children. Today lots of children are only doing education but education not for full of life they have some sport to they life. Children going after school and weekend classes they can’t do any sports. Today lots of kids are very fat. Because they have no time to do anything.
Parents are have busy life. Than they are only stay at weekends. Than weekends also children going to classes than parents and children are not in together. Than they miss family love and family care.
I think children have enough education at school. Than they have healthy life and good education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ports. Today lots of kids are very fat. Because they have no time to do anything. Pare...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ve no time to do anything. Parents are have busy life. Than they are only stay at w...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
... anything. Parents are have busy life. Than they are only stay at weekends. Than we...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... anything. Parents are have busy life. Than they are only stay at weekends. Than we...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...e. Than they are only stay at weekends. Than weekends also children going to classes...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rents and children are not in together. Than they miss family love and family care. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...rents and children are not in together. Than they miss family love and family care. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...ildren have enough education at school. Than they have healthy life and good educati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29813764863 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 176.041082164 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8718240197 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.8 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350259290914 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139844914586 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109170100605 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227099651009 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546579562418 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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