The education pressure that children nowadays suffer is more immense. Many parents have a tendency to send their kids to extra classes after all-days establishments or even at weekends. In my opinion, I agree that education is important for all of us, but getting too much involves in courses will lead to some other problems. So, absolutely, organizing extra classes is an unnecessary burden for children. This essay will shed some light on the reasons that have shaped my opinion.
In most schools, students have already learnt enough during a school-day. And teachers, also, provide homework in order to review knowledge for them. In addition, after 8 hours studying at school, all children must get exhausted and need to relax rather than keep on with additional classes. In other words, if endure more classes in fatigue state, they will probably obtain mental sickness and so that, the parents waste a lot of money as well as their children’s time and health.
Moreover, young people should be encouraged to experience different activities. Spending time on hobbies enables student to improve their creativity and also other social skills, such as communication, making friends or solving problems skills which have significant impact on their career paths. Besides, they can use the spare time to do exercises for better health or to support parents with household chores for the sense of responsibility and self-reliance.
In conclusion, this extra help is not always effective. Rather than try to stuff their brain by extra classes, children should strike a balance between the time they dedicate to their studies and leisure to get the best performance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, well, after all, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78201068964 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665427509294 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4850879937 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285954995522 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869729631968 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514820303704 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153290351132 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554446597774 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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