In many parts of world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
Here and now, all around the globe crime rate increasing in numbers whereas teenagers below 18 years performing more antisocial activities. This offence doing by children and teenagers due to economical obstacles as well as lack of parental support. There are a plethora of solutions to prevent the minority age group from attaining crime.
In the era of the modern world, parents were too busy with their job and business. They did not have time for their child and some of the Parents not understand the children's feeling. When parents compared their child with another student at that time child feel bad to think and because of that purpose they get starting hating those people and in the long term, it leads to crime. I think family time is very beautiful and mesmerise moment. It improves strong bonding between the family members. Furthermore, the lack of financial ability it motives the child towards crime. For instance, some of the children's who lives their life as an orphan perform small crimes for their daily living because they have a desire to get more money for living. Furthermore, faulty peer group often lead to crimes. Some of the peers motivate them for wrongdoing and it causes series offence. Moreover, steps toward the precautions never give harsh punishment to the child it deeply enhances the negativity of children. Make sure parents should be careful while in front of the child. The juvenile offence is a very uncertain fact for every nook and corner. Always try to track your child that what they are doing. If they doing the wrong thing, correct them in a polite way and even if they have uncontronable behaviour take a visit to psychology experts for their co-counselling.
To conclude, it is tough for the nation to eradicate crime but not the impossible task. Take proper guidance and take step towards possible solutions. It is depending on parents how they can carry their child after attaining the crime. Juvenile home is the best rehabilitation center for that child who performs severe felony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95335276968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51660416049 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4548963595 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9047619048 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153919540985 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422726945171 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500517690598 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117462874302 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669927552639 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.