The Graph below gives information about Dubai gold sales in 2002
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparison where relevant.
The line graph depicts fluctuations which occurs in 2002 in the sales of gold in Dubai
Overall, It can be manifested that In the year of 2002 the gold sales remains changed throughout the year rather than January and December. whereas peak point noticeable in March, in contrast, the lowest was observed in July and September.
First of all, In January the gold sale was 200 millions of dirham which are remains the same for May, August and almost the same in ending 3 months (October, November and December). Furthermore, another eye seeking data given in the chart which is before the months of may sales increased which is above 209 million dirhams and at the opposite side between the May to December sales between 100 to 200 million of dirhams.
In addition to the highest sales done in March which is around 350 million dirhams which is gradually gallon down in April, May and June as 250 for a formal one, 200 for the middle one and 150 for the later one. whereas the same scale of the gold sale showed in July and September which was approximately 125 million dirhams and that was the lowest price scale throughout the year.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Whereas
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Suggestion: 200 million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, whereas, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64851485149 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32176106727 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0050233722 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993992062103 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547550986099 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588045215265 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092348090781 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709996479592 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.