In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. why is the case happening? How should children and teenagers be punished ?
At the present day, the ratio of attempting crimes is augmenting rapidly by youth in myriads parts of the world. The reason behind this is the recklessness attitude of parents towards teenagers and due to peer pressure. The problem could be solved with the help of the government and parents.
To begin with, the main reason behind rising juvenile crimes is the behaviour of parents. In many families, parents are conflicting with each other and owing to stress they forget that they have some responsibility towards their child. For example, when adolescents do not get a better environment at home they feel alone and indulge themselves in offences with accompanied by others. Another reason is peer pressures. These days youngster often make friends. some of their friend's form group have expensive stuff. For example a phone, car, fancy watch and, many more. By seeing extravagant items of friends, individual demand that sorts of stuff from their parents when parents deny for buying kids attempt crimes. Moreover, online offence also one of the biggest reason behind the crime. Numerous shows telecast on television and a mobile phone daily basis related to murder, theft, kidnapping and so on. Therefore, by watching these types of episodes children apply in their life for taking revenge. To illustrate, although kids know that doing offence is awful then also they are thinking to try for taking reprisal.
To tackle this problem, the fundamental solution is family should not fight in front of their children so that they do not learn bad things from the quarrel. Along with that they must have to spend time with kids and listen to their problems as parents duty is to instil good values inside their children. secondly, keep a track of what the child is doing. Despite being busy in works focus what is going on in a child mind sometimes teenager are telling lie to their parents and if this will not find by the caretaker it might be dire consequences in the later life. Furthermore, the government should give punishment if delinquent did by teenagers. however, government bodies should not provide a high level of punishment. They should cater the lenient penalty to offenders. Either authority would send low-breaker to a rehabilitation centre or give them public work so that do some productive work.
In recapitulation, as juvenile crime is increasing day by day due to lack of family support to the child and peer pressure. The workable solution is that the government and family should give some effort to tackle these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61305108755 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569411764706 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8273557437 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150192238356 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372175302583 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343006525724 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924505393263 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433618717962 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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