Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little more action can be done to stop crime. Discuss and give your view?
It is unquestionable that in this globe crime increase as high buildings grows. As crime touch to maximum many are feel danger to go out from their house. Some believe that number of action should be increased so the crime can be control, whereas others feel that if little more steps can stop the crime. In this essay I will discuss both the view and sum up with my opinion.
At the first place, the government should make law, which holds the neck of crime in proper manner. Many criminals have been free after they attempt the crime because the lack of law and force to control it is insufficient to fulfill. For the instance, in India who do rape can not give the hang till death without any powerful evidence and later they gave prison for the some years and they will be free. Therefore, the actions are their but it should be increased as the people of nation take air from crime free world.
Other people think that if state make harder the law the crime rate goes downward or became zero. The proper force should be formed to prevent less crime rather than police, as they have only one motive to reduces the crime in any situation. In this globe only few countries are their with zero crime or with less than 5%, from that one is New Zealand. To make law strict, the political leaders increased the punishment by increasement in fine or by send them to more time in jail. The results were there in opposite only but it takes more time to become zero crime rate nation.
To sum up, government has to make law as strict as they can form; to take the crime rate to the end level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, whereas, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38175675676 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10650493441 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5728571071 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412759935273 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143437595061 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119805444126 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248437088254 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12851144878 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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