Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace in the future. Others think the true function of a university is to provide access to knowledge for its own sake. What do you think are the main functions of a university?
In this knowledgeable world everyone needs a powerful and full of ability person in their field of work. Many tells that universities give their maximum attention on graduates for giving them proper brain studies as well as skills, which will helpful in the workplace in the future. But others argue that colleges have first priority to gave knowledge for its own benefit. In this essay I will discuss both statements and tell main function of university.
In the first place, students are person who gain maximum studies knowledge from their teacher in different level of school and university. The university are responsible to give training to graduates for the work placement which are main function of there future life. The student who have less knowledge or no skill for work,so they have to get rejection in the future life. And there the many people put fingers towards the university and pick out their mistakes or blame their education. In that reason, the university have to focus on proper knowledge as well as skills, which helps them in future.
To run the university they firstly required the students and if university don't gave proper education then they have to see the backwards in the field. There were many university in world but only few university are there in best list because they gave students a perfect knowledge with good understanding like, Oxford university. As the knowledge is main key role rather than giving unused work to do or mislead them in wrong direction.
To sum up, the first motive of university to give proper knowledge, with the perfect skills to have brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun university seems to be countable; consider using: 'many universities'.
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'perfect knowledge'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, well, as well as, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96691176471 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56446934622 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511029411765 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1525268628 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235713681854 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926387486859 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381137023077 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154223565306 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240137452214 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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