many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
I agree with that opinion. Because in the circus, there are many different animals, such as Lion, Tiger, and Crocodile, they are very dangerous and can be harmful to dolphins. And because the dolphin is a very friendly, smart and don’t usually harm some animals else. So people have to train dolphins that they can against those cruel animals. Specially, dolphins are very smart, so they will know who are enemies, who are friends, that they will not hurt all of the animals in the circus. In my opinion, dolphins are very important to circus performances, so training them is necessary to have a good show.
Dolphins are cute, lovely and intelligent, so we have to train them softly, that they will not injure anyone. God dam mother fucker. I have dokphin's sperm in my virgina.
I like some fucking chipensese.i like cookie and sperm. My uncle make love to a dog when I wad tewlve.My face is a piece of shit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49910820857 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8580204554 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7272727273 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199118164152 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720415732988 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691427339589 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992725645332 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902197508174 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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