Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Dolphins have always been regarded as one of the most intelligent creatures in the sea. Their ability to communicate, learn, and socialize has captivated people. The dolphins show are fantastic. They perform lots of tricks such as passing balls, waving their tails and else. This helps people make a lot of money. But, for the dolphins, this is an abuse!!!
First, dolphins may get hurt or injured during the training or performance. If they do, it will take a long time for them to recover. Serious injuries might be with them forever.
Secondly, the pool is too small for the dolphins, whose physiology are built for the wide open seas. So they might lose natural abilities of a sea creature…Think of having to stay cooped up in a tiny room day in and day out!
Besides, dolphins perform not because they enjoy, they are starved. These lovely creatures were starved until the show during which they were fed as a reward for their performance. Unbelievable!!! Dolphins are not only an animal species but also are our FRIENDS <3 And they aren’t robots which help people make money. If you want to entertain, there’re lots of ways to amuse ourselves other than seeing these beautiful friends performing in captivity, out of fear and hunger!!!
Dolphins are some of the most playful and intelligent animals on our planet. Even though dolphins spend their lives in the water, they are not fish, but are mammals. Dolphins can't breathe water like fish, but need to come to the surface to breath air. There are many kinds of dolphins. Perhaps the most famous are the Bottlenose Dolphin and the Killer Whale (that's right the Orca, or Killer Whale, is a member of the dolphin family). How do dolphins live? Dolphins are very social animals. Many dolphins travel in groups called pods. Some dolphins, like Killer Whales, live in pods of 5-30 members for their entire lives. Each pod behaves differently. Some pods migrate and travel around the world, while others have a specific territory. Sometimes pods can group together to make giant pods as large as 1000 or more dolphins. Baby dolphins are called calves.
Dolphins have excellent eyesight and hearing. Underwater they use echolocation. Echolocation is kind of like sonar where dolphins make a sound and then listen to the echo. Their hearing is so sensitive to these echoes that they can almost "see" objects in the water by hearing. This allows dolphins to locate food in cloudy or dark water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92805755396 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57704183867 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580335731415 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4691875196 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189724798967 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505736030946 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440722595823 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888016649846 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478605889596 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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