Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should, therefore, be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.
What are your opinions on this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.
In the vast majority of nations, the number of people in debt increases steadily. Owing to the fact that a chunk of them is unable to repay, experts throughout the developed and developing world claim that taking out a loan should be made more difficult for an individual.
Personally, I advocate their point of view; however, the possibility of taking out a quick loan should not be abandoned.
Let us get it started with the paramount reason why the changes are indispensable. These days because contemporary society is exceedingly materialistic, a myriad of people purchase things they actually do not desire and cannot afford. The research conducted by Harvard University indicates that 65% of all the consumers during the period from 2019-2020 spent approximately $1000 on gadgets they never used. The possibility of using a credit card and taking out a loan helps them to get into debt fast. It has serious complications. The fundamental one is the fact that it usually implies considerable financial problems for a family. This issue is especially omnipresent in indigent countries that because of huge personal debts, a profusion of families loses the roof over their heads. Therefore, the authorities should undertake steps to tackle this phenomenon.
However, sometimes a possibility of taking out a quick loan is requisite. There are individuals that cannot afford to acquire a costly product they need immediately. For instance, some students need to obtain a laptop or a desktop computer because it is a mandatory device to be successful at the university. A plethora of students do not earn any money and have to lend some sum from a bank. In such cases, taking out a loan should not be difficult. Furthermore, loans are immensely vital for some families that because of financial situation cannot afford to obtain staple products. For those individuals, credit cards are the only way to survive such an uncomfortable period.
To recapitulate, the government should regulate law regarding to lending an immense sum of money. It causes huge personal debts that may be detrimental to family life. Nevertheless, for some groups of people, credit cards and quick loans are completely crucial and the possibility of using these should not be constrained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07608695652 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89001687582 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 368.0 20.2975951904 1813% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1868.0 106.682146367 1751% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 368.0 20.7667163134 1772% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 93.0 7.06120827912 1317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35123863378 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.35123863378 0.084324248473 417% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203936277156 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651333910032 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 186.5 13.0946893788 1424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -302.04 50.2224549098 -601% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 146.8 11.3001002004 1299% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.09 8.58950901804 304% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 149.2 10.1190380762 1474% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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