Many people believe that big businesses in addition to generating profits should be involved in and responsible for the social life of the community.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are many big and well-known company in all around the world such as Hyundai or Facebook. Some people believe that, these factories should involved in social life in the community in addition to earn money. Although companies may have been some restrictions for this work nonetheless, in my opinion they should help in this field. This essay will mention to two of the most important reasons.
First of all, we should accept this fact that government’s financial resources are limitation. The majority of these incomes received through getting tax from people and industries. Therefore, they may not be able to provide sufficiently some daily citizen requirements such as medical services. For this reason, the big company which their profits from selling products is very high, can assist to the governments for rising the level of people life.
Secondly, in my opinion, this action by company can even help to their more selling products through advertisement. For example, you assumed that the Facebook institution give some services for citizen’s medical all around the world. With doing this work, the people will interested in this company for their l. consequently, the people prefer to use from this social media rather than other applications. As a result of this action, the number of users who utilize from this media will increase dramatically, and naturally the incoming of company also, will increase.
On the other hand, we should consider this subject which if governments do not provide some facilities for these businesses such as, reducing taxes or giving loan, it is maybe that they cannot present such services to people for a long time.
To sum up, although involved in social life by big businesses may be have some restrictions, nonetheless I agree with this idea which they should participate in rising level of people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
.... With doing this work, the people will interested in this company for their l. consequent...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
..., we should consider this subject which if governments do not provide some facilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21381578947 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74001705706 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3957413568 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247383008467 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878334586391 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797569355918 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159722379879 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511774079672 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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