some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead.
To what extent do you agree on disagree?
In many countries offender have sent to the prison in order to pass their convictions. Some people argue that it is more beneficial both for person itself and society if only a craft be taught them rather than send to the prison. Although, in my view, this is a well solution, nonetheless, I believe that in some offences it depends to crime they have committed as well.
Giving education to conviction instead of sending to the prison has many benefits for person itself and even society. According to the recent research, one of the primary reasons for committing a crime among people around the world is not having job and, proficiency as well. Therefore, when they become familiar with the educational course which are benefit for job marketing in prison, consequently, they will find a job after the jail period and can earn money, and do not commit a crime again. As a result of this happening, the number of crime in community decrease markedly.
On the other hand, some of the offenses such as brutal murder and savage rape that are vicious crimes have negative impacts on people’s society. In my opinion, these people should be surveyed precisely in order to understand their motives for doing this activities. Likewise, I think just giving train is not sufficient for them and they would penalize with going to the prison. However, after the period of committed, education may be well for them.
To sum up, although this is a well way that prisoner learn a crafts during the period of their committed instead of going to the prison, moreover, I think for some convicting such as brutal murder, it is essential these persons spend a short time in the jail in order to punish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
In many countries offender have sent to the prison in ord...
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Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rease markedly. On the other hand, some of the offenses such as brutal murder and sava...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urveyed precisely in order to understand their motives for doing this activities....
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... to understand their motives for doing this activities. Likewise, I think just givi...
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Line 13, column 60, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a craft' or simply 'crafts'?
Suggestion: a craft; crafts
... this is a well way that prisoner learn a crafts during the period of their committed in...
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Line 13, column 205, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
...convicting such as brutal murder, it is essential these persons spend a short time in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, even so, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86006825939 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57302574958 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7837026698 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0833333333 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194854904768 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074417953102 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443320857483 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124460506282 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461675780812 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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