Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport. However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among wider population.
It is believed by a great number of people that riding a bicycle is an activity beneficial both to the health and the environment. Nevertheless, cycling is preferred only in certain countries. In my opinion, many people are busy and consequently they lack time for cycling.
First of all, there is no doubt that cycling contributes considerably to one's health. Some people are keen on maintaining fit and riding a bicycle improves a person's physical fitness and endurance. Moreover, it is usually an outdoor activity, which is in the benefit of people as they get fresh air.
In terms of environment, the world currently faces serious problems due to the pollution. Bicycles are human-powered vehicles, therefore, if people travelled more by this means of transport, they would significantly reduce their carbon footprints, whereas driving the car regularly emits huge amounts of the gas in question.
Although some people avoid cycling because they lack time, they are also concerned about safety. Many cities do not benefit from an an adequate cycling infrastructure. Especially during rush hour, some drivers show impatience and even get angry when they encounter cyclists on the road. By constructing cycling facilities, such as cycle lanes and bike racks, most people would certainly feel safer and unecessary altercations between drivers and cyclists would be avoided. Another way to stimulate the population to use the bicycle on a regular basis is to organize city parades, given the fact that this type of event makes the roads available only for the cyclists and not for the other traffic participants.
To conclude, I strongly believe that each country has the responsibility to provide cycling facilities in order to encourage a a wider population to travel by bicycle.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26582278481 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.155063291139 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0854430379747 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0569620253165 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0348101265823 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117088607595 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0379746835443 0.0403226058552 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95571003655 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316455696203 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110759493671 0.0861772015684 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00949367088608 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00632911392405 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1793.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.26923076923 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384615384615 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325174825175 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213286713287 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15034965035 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95571003655 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 71.8790932321 60.7387585426 118% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9635449855 49.517814964 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.071428571 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 52.9460539461 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.70512820513 1.69124875643 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422711482285 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0770813151394 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06933714667 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534040872668 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194383155672 0.148594505496 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150919529389 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710468209684 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254056270994 0.324371583561 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0990316697457 0.0638462369009 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260542110076 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049760313017 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.