Many people believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of a modern city.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transport.
Arguing about both the advantages and disadvantages of the convenient public transportation system is of vital concern to society. Plenty of people claim that a convenient public transport system is important in the current city. The term “ public transport system” tends to be interpreted in many different ways such as train or bus; therefore, defining the term is of vital significance to avoid rambling discussion. I focus on “ public transport system” as train and bus. Let me discuss the pros and cons of train and bus.
One of the main advantages of using train and bus is that they are cheap and Eco-friendly. For instance, in Japan, plenty of worker commute by using the train, just because they can save money and their companies pay around half of these fees. The train uses only electricity as its energy (does not emit CO2 and NO2), and so this transportation system does less contaminate environment than cars.
There is little doubt that there are some disadvantages of using them, and the most notable is that the train makes people stressful due to a crowded train. For example, as I mentioned above, most workers commute by train in Japan. Most of them usually use 8:00 train and 18:00 train, and then these trains are extremely crowded. In these crowded trains, people are pushed with each other, and this crowd situation is so stressful.
In conclusion, as outlined in this essay, low-cost and ecological transportation system is the most serious advantage of effective transportation system such as train, with the main disadvantage being heavy stress because of its crowdedness. Hopefully, people should not overlook the demerits of an effective transportation system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15770609319 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92212530618 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8327864879 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298650687532 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124016548099 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116624681474 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191506946449 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146191465338 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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