Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
Many individuals claim that their country may suffer from several drawbacks along with the rapid development of international tourism. This essay will discuss the causes that led to this phenomenon as well as methods for solving the issue.
Biodiversity loss may seem to be the first and foremost reason for this attitude. To attract a large number of international tourists, a significant percentage of land and beach may be used to construct tourist destinations such as resorts or shopping centers. This leads to the destruction of many species’ natural habitats, which may push them to the edge of extinction. Besides, many people are also afraid that the number of crimes will increase if tourism develops. Several criminal issues, such as robbery or burglary, have been reported by the local residents currently, and most native people worry that this number will continue increasing in the future.
However, there are some methods given to change this negative attitude. Courses for the tourism business should be held to raise awareness of suitable natural resource exploitation. Moreover, the government may lend a hand to ease this phenomenon by enacting laws for international foreigners solely and fine them heavily if they break the law.
In conclusion, it’s undeniable that tourism development has both positive and negative aspects, and instead of paying too much attention to the benefits, people should focus on the drawbacks so as to provide solutions to ease the issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...st reason for this attitude. To attract a large number of international tourists, a significant p...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...s, people should focus on the drawbacks so as to provide solutions to ease the issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40425531915 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99764808971 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7559332398 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220444209308 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795961611293 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481595049573 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128691934041 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180926744587 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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