Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
A majority of people think that foreign tourism has negative effects on their country. There are several reasons for this negative attitude towards tourism. In this essay, I will outline several reasons for this and put forward some feasible measures to address this issue.
The main reason comes from international tourists, who can bring dangerous diseases such as respiratory diseases. For example, in 2018, the breakdown of the COVID-19 pandemic brought to the local people by international tourists, which led to thousands of people around the world severely affected. On top of that, tourists are often criticised for contributing to environmental pollution. Indigenous people realise that they irresponsibly throw garbage into the surrounding environment, increasing the amount of waste everywhere and causing environmental pollution. For instance, people may experience skin diseases and have problems with their daily lives because of the horrible smell of garbage.
There are a number of viable solutions to help tackle this problem. Firstly, the authorities should invest in medical equipment to check the health of travellers at the international airport and arrange a medical team to prevent the disease from spreading to our country. Secondly, the government should organise campaigns or banners about banning littering so it can help raise tourist awareness and arrange plenty of trash bins everywhere.
In conclusion, there are main contributors to the problem, and several measures are suggested to put an end to the situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60425531915 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95055373032 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2972911136 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220591653246 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833736187502 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083412374008 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106105282361 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933545204975 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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