Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at work place Do you agree or disagree with statement

Essay topics:

Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at work place. Do you agree or disagree with statement.

Uniform combines someone with ideal principles appealing to well being of working sector. Presently, wearing uniform is considered to be a lucrative idea in order to maintain standard of work by setting up benchmark for workers. Here, I would like to account with
the given statement.

Manifold points are there to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, without uniform working places are like ' a bird without wings '.To illustrate, uniforms not only relize someone his responsibility being a part of organization but also make him obedience to rules and regulations.Thus,schools,colleges,companies and health centres require uniform to uplift the standard and reputation in the society. Apart from it, uniform, a symbol of identification, is lucrative to identify members associated with the organization especially during festive ceremonies. Hence, it makes it easier to stop entrance of outsiders at work places to avert mishappenings.

Further emphasising on my point of view. Uniform plays a magnificent role to evolve unity in diversity.For instance, uniform develops a sense of equality among people of different racials, casts, and categories like haves and have-nots .As a result, it vanished discrimination and therefore workers make combined efforts for achieving targets. In addition, dress code might be fruitful to keep people away from buying fashionable outfits. Therefore, people are expected to follow 'simple living high thinking 'along with saving time and money. Last but not least, dress code being respect to dignity of employees by offering unique look at working segments.

To recapitulate, uniform represents artistic expressions of human nature belongings to specific working zone.Undeniably, uniforms put some restrictions on the freedom of employees. However, I still believe that setting a particular dress code is need of an hour for a firm to maintain discipline and equality.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (9 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63103448276 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76211321444 2.80592935109 134% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1398125932 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208222440412 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695581605046 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447486494662 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11203093524 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340627084311 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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