Currently, money has become a basic necessity of life. Some people think wage plays a crucial role in everyone growth, while other people think rather than money, happiness and enjoying of your task is more important. This essay will discuss of both views, I personally agree money is not vital than work amusement and enjoying your work.
On the one hand, some people think, good wage is a matter, which gives you better lifestyle. All of us have daily nessesity and mostly, we need money. For example, food, transportation , clothes, education and so on. If we have good salary we can do or we buy what we want, I would say that human activity is fullfil their desires. Furthermore, people can create luxurious life, better education for themselves and also, enjoying modern equipment and vehicles.
On the other hand, some people think enjoying and comfort of their task is more considrable than wealth. It is true that, if you have good wage, but you do not like or do not enjoy this type of task, it will never create for you enjoying activity. To examplify, most immigrants in some countries, who do not work according to their speciality, may be this job is not related to their qualification. This kind of job never brings to them pleasure, enjoyment, but they are earn more.
All in all, I consider it is more significant to feel happy yourself in your task to earn much money. No matter, if you do not feel happy yourself from your corner of your heart, good wages can not create happy life. Money is something, but not everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, kind of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69741697417 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53011436463 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4864606419 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258403576446 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881127108234 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420978470804 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153285051862 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505179333599 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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