In this ever-changing and demanding world, there are a number of breakthrough advancements in almost any area of life. However, this current era also engenders some drawbacks in individual’s altitude towards society, one of which is the issue of people’s misbehavior with community and other people. This essay intends to make clear some of causes of this trend and the approach to ameliorate the problems.
To commence with, nowadays we live in the era of technology in which not only the mutual connection is easier and quicker than ever before, but cyber bullying is also at the alerting rate. Due to the emergence of social networking sites such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and so on, it is possible for people to get in touch with others instantly and freely take part in conversations about posts on these websites. Therefore, some individuals have made use of this tool to found a fake account and abuse other people by the worst and the most irrespective words about their appearances or secrets without worrying of criticizing or judging. The victims who are seriously and directly affected by cyber violence would be rigorously put under a lot of pressure and gradually ensconce themselves from the adverse side of the society make them become an antisocial. As a result, the number of people who have anti-social behaviors is raising more because of the unqualified and unhealthy development of social media these days.
Here are some ways to improve this affair. The invasion of privacy should be get rid of by the more online safety rules. Raising voice to protect ones who is treated crucially by cyber users and having a more open-minded about the society. Additionally, we should also practice for ourselves a valid fence to vail from negative factors of society and take more pleasure from the fascinating surroundings. Last but not least, we can find for ourselves a hobby to do in our free time in lieu of addicting to fame and fortune and concerning too much about other people saying about us.
In short, being an antisocial is not a great choice to enjoy our wonderful life so getting ourselves to become more open to the upcoming from the outside world whether it is a luck or a misfortune would make you not regretful about our decision. Reverence others is also a moral manner that we need to get the hang of and pass down to our descendants
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...se side of the society make them become an antisocial. As a result, the number of people who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87684729064 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76497772109 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6570446655 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0666666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154301429431 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530100388148 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044882914213 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886952438695 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458703720194 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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