Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situarion? How to improve it?
Nowadays, people argue that there is a general rise in crime rates and disrespectful behaviour towards the other members of the society. This essay will discuss the primary reasons for this problem including unemployment, growing poverty and the influence of media. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including increase employment opportunities, reducing poverty and censorship of undesirable content from the media.
Firstly, despite economic growth of the nation, there is widespread unemployment and growing poverty which led to increasing criminal activities and unruly behaviour of the citizens. To be precise, when young people did not get their aspired and desired job and suffering from poverty they get frustrated and indulge in such crimes, and they throw out their frustration by misbehaving with their fellow citizens. For instance, research suggested that incidence of criminal activities are more from educated, unemployed youths. The ultimate solution is that the government should make all possible ways to increase employment, to reduce poverty by providing adequate support to poorer sections of the society to pull them to the upper level. These steps surely help to build the better community.
Secondly, the influence of the media made the situation worse. To make it clear, nowadays most of the movies have extreme violence and sexual content which wrongfully influence the youths who often try to imitate the same. Inaddition, easy access to these contents in smartphones through the internet also the cause. For example, recently in Bangalore, one teenager mimic the villain role of one movie and end up in prison. This problem can be addressed effectively by strict censorship of the unwanted material in the media. Besides, the government should also ban several bad websites on the internet. These measures will help to alleviate the problem.
In conclusion, antisocial and disrespectful behaviour prevalent in many societies. This essay discussed how the antisocial behaviour caused by unemployment, poverty, and led by the media. This essay also suggested that the solutions to this problems are by increasing employment, reducing poverty and by enforcing strict censorship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58529411765 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85147172587 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0372957312 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14457098718 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445915896082 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043461827421 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987648068269 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574248346164 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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