Many people believe that TV news and media in general have a detrimental effect on our life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion, including relevant examples.
Media is called the mirror of every society as it portrays every sector of a country comprehensively . Presently, according to some people, the influence of media and television news on the lifestyle of human beings is inimical. Here, I discord with the given statement entirely.
There are multifarious points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, news channels keep people updated and well informed with the world happenings.
To demonstrate, people are served variety of news related to distinct fields such as politics, health, business, education, transportation and so on by media channels. Most recent news and happenings illustrated by news channels allow people to become advance and update their ways of living according to the changes in different walks of life. Adding to it, people get to know about general issues such health concerns prevailing in society, cleanliness, crime happenings, social events held in their area with the help of news media. Therefore, it would be wrong to say that news media is perilous for the life of human beings.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, media forms such as internet, television, mobile and computer not only entertain people but also provide a great deal of convenience in their social and professional lives. To be specific, nowadays, abundance of movies, web series, reality shows, sports and soap opera provided by media forms surround people with amusement and relaxation. What is more, the facilities such as filling forms, sending official documents, making money transactions, doing business online, work from home have been introduced by internet, computer and mobile phones in order to facilitate professional life. Taking these benefits into consideration, claiming media as negative influencer is disgraceful.
To recapitulate, television news and media may have few short comings. I, however, still believe that the impact of news channels and media forms on human lifestyle is magnificent.
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| 2021-03-28 | Justin | 67 | view |
| 2018-12-16 | mostafa jahangiri | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2783171521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76900511439 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 309.0 20.2975951904 1522% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1631.0 106.682146367 1529% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 309.0 20.7667163134 1488% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 85.0 7.06120827912 1204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207910361208 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207910361208 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117712559007 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324981302895 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 157.9 13.0946893788 1206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -250.62 50.2224549098 -499% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 125.0 11.3001002004 1106% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.41 8.58950901804 273% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 125.6 10.1190380762 1241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 158.0 10.7795591182 1466% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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