Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that wild animal is a discovery of the globe and human have no rights to harm them. Some people assume that we should take care of all wild animals. However, others think that we should protect only selected wild animals. I believe that we should protect all wild animals.
Embark on, There is a multifarious animal all over the globe. Many of them are known and some of animals that we don’t know. Even we can’t know about its name. Some people believe that we should just protect only few animals because they may have a fear of harm that many wild animals are not take care of the things and they damage all the things wherever it. Also, many people have a phobia that they can’t handle the situation when animal in front of them that’s why some people assume that only few animals should be protected.
Nevertheless, many people believe that wild animal is our century so we can’t protect some of them. All wild animals are equal and the government or a human have no rights to harm them. Nowadays generation may hardly know about some of the wild animals and they have zero knowledge about others. To keep safe the wild animals we get some knowledge about it.
Moreover, the Government must take care of wild animals and alive our discovery. Also the animal rescuers have a brief knowledge about how to treat wild animals. One can learn a lot from animals which can benefit the human race. For instance, a lot of medicines have been derived from the chemicals which are produced by animals.
Eventually, in the conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that wild animal protection is essential because if the animal is gone, it will be impossible to study and learn from them.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...r the globe. Many of them are known and some of animals that we don’t know. Even we can’t know ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... animals because they may have a fear of harm that many wild animals are not take...
^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...wadays generation may hardly know about some of the wild animals and they have zero knowled...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...f wild animals and alive our discovery. Also the animal rescuers have a brief knowle...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65472312704 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31843580111 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4332247557 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5575350055 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441068756142 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177736747941 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141765569024 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274197868747 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144900190684 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the animals') or simply say ''some animals''.
Suggestion: some of the animals; some animals
...r the globe. Many of them are known and some of animals that we don’t know. Even we can’t know ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... animals because they may have a fear of harm that many wild animals are not take...
^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...wadays generation may hardly know about some of the wild animals and they have zero knowled...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...f wild animals and alive our discovery. Also the animal rescuers have a brief knowle...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65472312704 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31843580111 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4332247557 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5575350055 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441068756142 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177736747941 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141765569024 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274197868747 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144900190684 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.