Everyone from all over the world know that wild animals are in danger of species' disappearance.And each person clearly understands that people have to protect them.As always, people are divided into two camps: those, who think we should protect only some of the wild animals; and their opponents-those, who believe that we must defend all of them.
From my point of view, I support the second ones.First of all, even if not all the animals disappear and are not in the need of protection and care, people may and should reduce the risk of extinction of wild animals in general, looking after the existing ones in a right way (cease hunt for them,stop bringing animals to the zoo and selling them different people).Because, due to the modern developments,as well as the done by them pollution, there are plenty of factories that were were built in the past and are in the building process now.Concurrently causing danger and reason to protect all of the wild animals (not only the ones, that are withering away, but existing ones as well).That is one of the most obvious and considerable reasons why we are ought to protect them and why I follow their idea.
Nevertheless, the reason of the first ones' opinion may be animals' extinction itself.There are more than enough cases of partial or complete extinction of different species of animals.The second reason may be the lack of funding to release the "rescue plan" for disappearing wild animals.After that, another cause why we should guard some of animals might be wild animals that have not yet been inspected by humans.Therefore, in order to illustrate the statement above,I can say that newly discovered animals, possibly, may not be used to modern world and changes in it-in that way, they are the ones that are threatened with extinction and the ones who we would be ought to care of.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... are in danger of species disappearance.And each person clearly understands that pe...
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...stands that people have to protect them.As always, people are divided into two cam...
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...those, who think we should protect only some of the wild animals; and their opponents-those...
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...oint of view, I support the second ones.First of all, even if not all the animals dis...
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...eneral, looking after the existing ones in a right way cease hunt for them,stop bringing anima...
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...e zoo and selling them different people.Because, due to the modern developments,as well...
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...ly causing danger and reason to protect all of the wild animals not only the ones, that ar...
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...inction of different species of animals.The second reason may be the lack of fundin...
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... order to illustrate the statement above,I can say that newly discovered animals, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, in general, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90127388535 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91064160576 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525477707006 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 104.0 20.2975951904 512% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.159728059 49.4020404114 393% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 513.0 106.682146367 481% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 104.666666667 20.7667163134 504% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.3333333333 7.06120827912 500% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31741016352 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234297954002 0.084324248473 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974169110262 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234297954002 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974169110262 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.0 13.0946893788 412% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.62 50.2224549098 -51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 42.7 11.3001002004 378% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.06 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 43.6 10.1190380762 431% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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