Nowadays, everyone can fully agree that social networks like Facebook and others, have really penetrated deep into our daily lives. And when it comes to their negative impact on humans' personalities and society in general, different people agree with this to a certain extent.
Firstly, I am going to discuss SNS' negative impact on personas with relevant examples.The reasons for its negative affect may be very obvious for lots of people.Using social media people may jeopardize, first of all, their privacy, even if they have set high quality security settings.Alongside with this, usage of social networking sites can cause physical and mental health issues as well: users can feel depression, isolation, anxiety, somatic complains; people can cause awful incidents, basing their actions on wrong information that they have red and that is spread via Internet; or harm their vision, people can suffer disbalance in sleeping schedule or even suicide; they might become dependent on Internet devices and have problems with their abilities to study.Also, network inhabitants can create a platform for cyber bullying, even not realizing it.We may not notice that someone is spying us or stalking us, as well.
Secondly, for society it can be harmful due to next reasons, related with humans' isolation and increased level of crime: Internet and social networking media is comfortable,affordable and open source of people's private information.Anyone, who have a hacker skills (and even not having them) can easily find each private data - about our hobbies, what we enjoy, our friend list,where and who we live with, where we study and other finding like the counted ones above- if they want. As a result, it can be very useful and is good for illegals, who can use personal data for their own gains.Another reasons is that people are getting more and more adapted to interactions via the Internet, completely forgetting about face-to-face contacts and nice walks with favourite humans.
To conclude, due to the factors and reasons counted above, I particularly agree that SNS have had a great negative effect on personages and society, and hope that people will use it more carefully and with vigilance to elude the potential dangers and troubles I have mentioned earlier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, in general, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25549450549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90119264208 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601648351648 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 272.428991768 49.4020404114 551% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.833333333 106.682146367 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6666666667 20.7667163134 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198329788383 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117682621607 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556299407435 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14538046018 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667917430461 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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