Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Children's education is a hot topic that is raising a lot of questions - who should primarily raise the kids, men or women? It is argued that in most societies men leave this responsibility to women because they make better parents. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons why I do agree with this point of view.
From the beginning of societies, women were the ones taking care of the kids, staying at home and leaving men with the duty of providing for the family. this did not happen, though, because a woman makes a better parent than a man, but because she is more resilient: we, women, are born with the capability of taking care of another human being, as well as with the responsibility of growing one inside of us from the beginning. In order to secure the preservation of the species, Mother Nature gave us the maternal instinct to protect and nurture our children. Consequently, women are less aggressive and more prone to communicate with kids from the time they are little girls. Obviously, in raising children, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable than a more aggressive one. Although there certainly exists gentlemen and aggressive women, females are less likely to resort to violence in an attempt to solve problems.
But if we consider that all women are good for their children and men can not raise a kid properly then, perhaps, it would be a partial judgment: Isn't there any family where the mother has died or is not present and the father takes care of the children as well as works to provide for the family? Certainly, there are lots. In third world countries, fathers are comparatively more educated than the mothers and the take care of their children's education greatly. In conclusion, even though females and mothers are by nature more prone to educate their kids, a child needs the affection and caring of both father and mother.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, then, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74539877301 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57850216576 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.387259032 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241907634987 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858128983852 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639923950325 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177591772978 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08032380693 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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