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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.

Essay topics: Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.

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Parents are the best gifts that any child can receive while parental roles and responsibilities are crucial for the parents to make their offsprings prepared for the foreseeable future. However, some individuals assert that only a mother's care is indispensable for the raising children whereas the role of the father is negligent. I moderately concur with this notion. The forthcoming paragraphs will scrutinize both virtues.

To embark with, this is not to say that men are not of importance in the development of a kid. It is unquestionable that women have proven themselves as a superior parent. As the only parent who is available for a juvenile all the time is a mother. Not just this, adolescents have a special interaction with their mothers. This can be classified by an example of a recent survey, from 2000 to 2015 a lion's share that is 89% individuals said that they spend most of their time with their mothers. Apart from this, by the birth of a kid, mother cater all the needs of a child and thus establish a quality rapport with offspring.

On the flip side, it would be a biased judgment if one say that merely a female can judge the kids. For instance, there are a plethora of houses where mothers are dead or not present, it is the only father who takes care of children as well as does the job. Moreover, a father is an aggressive parent who always motivates, encourages and boost up the confidence of his progeny to excel in the concerned field.

From the aforementioned discussions, it can be concluded that although the title of mother is irreplaceable, but still both parents succor in the uplifting of any individual and serve their own purpose.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76632302405 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8574415255 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.846908487 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124492724509 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437835337733 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457874428198 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652904488515 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417708581143 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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