Many people do not fee safe either at home or when they out. What are the causes and what can be done to solve this.
Community security always a heated topic among the public. Although in many areas security has been getting better, there are a number of people concern about their safety inside or outside their home. This essay will delve into the causes and give some suggestions in the
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First of all, many residents feel dangerous in daily lives are caused by several aspects. To begin with, people are exposed under violent and sexual environment frequently. For instance, movies and television programmes that glorify violence may confuse people’s realization of reality. This may leads them lack of truth to others especially in the youth group. Secondly, people who living in some particular areas that crime rates are higher than other places will suffer more. That is because in such area have higher risk to occur crime such as robbery and shoplifting.and etc. Last but not least, lack of communication to neighborhood is considered another cause. People are too busy to participate in community’s activities and many people even do not realize who in the next door. This result in the loss of community belonging and dependence among the public.
On the other hand, there are several strategies could be done in order to relieve folks’ the emotion of fear. Firstly, governments should publish new policy to limit the appearance of violence to the public as well as enhance the police force to against the crime. This will help to reduce the crime rates and create an increasingly safer community which people could enjoy the comfortable atmosphere and no longer to worry about safety. In terms of individuals, people should encourage themselves to participate to the community activities more. The resin for this is that If people are surrounded by familiar person, then they may feel safer compare to before that even did not realize who live in the next door.
In conclusion, this essay argued the possible reasons that may cause the fear of emotion among some people and some solutions could be taken. Governments and individuals should work together to create a safer community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...opic among the public. Although in many areas security has been getting better, there...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... causes and give some suggestions in the End First of all, many residents fe...
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Line 7, column 578, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...r crime such as robbery and shoplifting.and etc. Last but not least, lack of communicati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1749271137 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70310348273 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9897692278 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6111111111 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160517302415 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045574900988 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387951312827 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100241718261 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00750675116597 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.