Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that literature and paintings are deemed more valuable art forms as opposed to film. In my opinion, a plausible reason why many consider film not as important as the other art forms in question is due to the fact that a film is partly the result of technology and consequently diminishes the charm of arts.
On the one hand, even though a film's storyline is frequently based on a prominent piece of writing, it alters the original story to a certain degree. Some of the people who are avid readers end up bitterly disappointed when watching a film with a significantly different plot, which is not according to the one the book presented. When reading literature or admiring paintings, one has to use his or her imagination in order to grasp the message the artist has meant. More often than not, many are keen on exploring new realms. In other words, they show willingness to enter a dimension where the impossible turns into possible. Conversely, thanks to technology, most films are relatively close to reality and they lay emphasis on common problems the humanity faces. This aspect of films is likely to be rather boring and uninteresting for a number of people.
Furthermore, especially when it comes to paintings, they cannot be found everywhere. Famous paintings generally lie worldwide, being part of the museum's collections. Hence, a person is bound to feel excitement when he finally has the chance to marvel at a painting.
On the other hand, many people watch films because they enjoy the effects and the vivid atmosphere a film conveys. People are able to see remote and fascinating places, which could be hardly reached. They are practically seized by the same emotions as the characters of the film they watch. The audience grows anxious when the character they empathize the most with is attacked or suffers, and show a state of joy when the hero eventually overcome the difficulties he or she encountered.
To conclude, I have mixed feelings on the matter in question. I strongly believe that it mainly depends on each person's taste whether they prefer art forms, such as literature or paintings, rather than film. Personally, I think that every art form has both positive aspects and drawbacks and it is our duty as so-called art connoisseur to identify them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'films'' or 'film's'?
Suggestion: films'; film's
...arts. On the one hand, even though a films storyline is frequently based on a prom...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...the original story to a certain degree. Some of the people who are avid readers end up bitt...
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'conversely', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'i think', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220930232558 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.160465116279 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0860465116279 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0767441860465 0.0501214627716 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.053488372093 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0953488372093 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0395348837209 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78978718857 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0372093023256 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00232558139535 0.00163938923432 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.106976744186 0.0861772015684 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0046511627907 0.021408717616 22% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0255813953488 0.011925033212 215% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2308.0 1933.35771543 119% => OK
No of words: 390.0 316.048096192 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91794871795 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341025641026 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248717948718 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197435897436 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138461538462 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78978718857 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.037074148 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582051282051 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 68.7106451267 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5263157895 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8869108258 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.473684211 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.3981106613 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.224 1.69124875643 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225781234765 0.332605444948 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.081933713697 0.102741220458 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0610411669658 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522672677471 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168089043463 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949979992637 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728194293857 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274064485389 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755377955335 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167914092996 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772877411208 0.058150111329 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.