The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nuclear power is by all means one of the most controversial topics nowadays. I think this is due to the fact that despite its unquestioned usefulness, still represents one of the biggest threats to the existence of our planet and the human race. Thereby, my feelings about it are mixed.
First of all, I do agree that nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. Earth already confronts with so many environmental issues. The big number of fabrics and vehicles have really polluted the air. There are places in the world which have gotten so polluted that the people were forbidden from stepping out of their houses. Hence we have to find ways to preserve and protect our planet. In this case, nuclear power is definitely a solution. Yet, there have been some nuclear accidents thus far. Probably the best-known are the ones in Fukushima and Chernobyl. People should take into consideration that nuclear power can be replaced with other forms of power, maybe even cheaper and cleaner. Hydopower, wind power or solar power are alternatives for this matter.
Unfortunately people do not use the nuclear power only for good purposes. Considering the level technology clinched, they have been able to create and improve the nuclear weapons. People are already aware of the damage which can be provoked by an atomic bomb. If an atomic bomb is dropped on a land, there will not be just sudden effects like the death of millions of people and the destruction of the land. A nuclear weapon which have been used can affect also the neighbourhoods and other generations who are yet to be born. It develops the so-called radiation sickness.
I cannot agree with the statement that the threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Everybody knows what had happened with the two Japanase cities, Hiroshima and Nagasaki, in the Second World War, on which The United States of America dropped two atomic bombs. By doing that, they have frightened the entire world. Nowadays there is a number of countries which are known for having nuclear weapons. For example, North Korea threatens the world lately, saying that they have and they are going to use their nuclear weapons. I reckon this as an act of showing their power in a world where we are supposed to live peacefully and equally.
That being said, I think it is exaggerated to say that the benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadventages. The nuclear power is partly beneficial partly risky. Still I strongly believe that no countries should produce nuclear weapons. If people are that afraid of nuclear power, they ought to get used to using less energy.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'for example', 'i reckon', 'i think', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214285714286 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.181632653061 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0959183673469 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0591836734694 0.0501214627716 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469387755102 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110204081633 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0530612244898 0.0403226058552 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54761583596 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224489795918 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0959183673469 0.0861772015684 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0163265306122 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163265306122 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2631.0 1933.35771543 136% => OK
No of words: 443.0 316.048096192 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93905191874 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20517956788 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343115124153 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248306997743 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158013544018 0.203846283523 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.097065462754 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54761583596 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.037074148 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534988713318 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 62.3593161015 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0891783567 180% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 15.275862069 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0389866844 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.724137931 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.275862069 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48275862069 0.814263465372 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 40.1065618432 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.31205673759 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559207317452 0.332605444948 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0700289298991 0.102741220458 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717627633403 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439051586905 0.534860350844 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145359545343 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182923612066 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112925125749 0.0742795772207 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394180016 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0432615548619 0.0638462369009 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379702659264 0.228012699653 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352004703888 0.058150111329 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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