Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away society”, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To want degree do you agree with this opinion?
It is claimed that humans have considered their society as a “throw-away one” since people are discharging huge plastic bags and rubbish into the environment that they cannot completely solve. Although some people say that this view is absurd, I totally agree with this suggestion.
There are two evidence prove that the consumption of plastic products and the amount of rubbish of people have significantly increased. First, most humans commodities are packed in plastic bags to easily trade so people consume tons of unfriendly environment bags every day. In fact, all sort of goods from food to clothes are contained in plastic bags even made from plastic, which leads to a great deal of plastic products and waste released into environment. Another proof that nowadays citizens have a tendency to use disposable products which has a huge diverse impacts on the environment. For example, the trend of youngster is using medical masks that is a disposable product in lieu of cloth masks and the young may use about 5-6 medical masks every day, which contributes a great amount of waste to the people garbage.
Moreover, no one can deny that although people fill up the environment with so many trash every day, they can dispose all of their garbage. Since most companies just focus on their profit and they do not have awareness about their responsibility for environment. As a result, they directly discharge the raw waste to rivers, oceans or lands, which is harmful for both humans and environment. In addition, national and local authorities often do not impose a clear policy about waste so the enterprises do not consider it as a crucial part of conducting a business. From the perspective of government, just few countries in the world have good places and methods to treat the waste so that most of garbage can not decompose and exist for thousand years.
In conclusion, I suppose it is complete true when saying the “throw-away society” is developed due to myriad of water released into the environment every day and the lack of suitable approaches for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impact'?
Suggestion: impact
...sable products which has a huge diverse impacts on the environment. For example, the tr...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trash seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much trash', 'a good deal of trash'.
Suggestion: much trash; a good deal of trash
... people fill up the environment with so many trash every day, they can dispose all of thei...
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Line 5, column 738, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...garbage can not decompose and exist for thousand years. In conclusion, I suppose it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02017291066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7722683882 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524495677233 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4179546391 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253888139823 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918076760757 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665847277202 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166843890319 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725803060359 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.