Many people think that men should go out to work while women place is in the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that men should be the breadwinners who should go out to work and earn money for all the incomes of the families and women should become the homemakers. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that this statement is neither right nor wrong but need to be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, men should go out to work due to some major reasons. Firstly, men are often better at physical beings so such jobs as explorers, pilots, firefighters should continued be done by men. In fact, from feudalistic societies, men are often considered to be the breadwinners of the families and women often stay at home to take care of their offspring.
On the other hand, I think that both parents work together but it should depend females’ interests and family backgrounds. Females who have a passion for working should be advised pursuing particular careers, especially such jobs as secretaries and receptionists. This would mean that men and women have the access to the same professional opportunities and they will be employed according to their abilities, qualifications and experiences as well as earn equal salaries. At home, fathers and mothers should share their responsibilities including parenting and domestic responsibilities such as childcare, cooking and cleaning. Besides, when men cannot earn enough money for their families, women are more likely to find a job.
In conclusion, although many people reckon that only men should work and women should be at home, I personally believe that they can work together but depend on some reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to pursue'.
Suggestion: to pursue
...a passion for working should be advised pursuing particular careers, especially such job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12741312741 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00276404026 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3188360392 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263428681849 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111684940634 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822362265267 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188184285866 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464779697365 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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