Many people think region effect successful person. Whats your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong.
Being successful is a paramount dream of every individual in our society. In order to achieve this the place you are currently residing can bring some positive or negative impact in one’s life. In this essay I will be discussing regarding my view for the same.
First and foremost, we can see a lot of people migrating to USA, Canada, London , and many developed countries stating that they don’t have enough resources for education and employment. In my opinion, this can be true for a small percentage of individuals ; if he or she wants to be successful in life there will be no odds stopping them back. Region don’t have much role to play in anyones life if you have the right idea and plan to execute.
If we take examples of a lot of successful people in our society, everybody had vision , irrespective of the place they are located. The Ambanis, Birlas and many top notch business man found the roots for their multi national companies from a land which was looted by the British many years back. Nevertheless, if you are unable to find the right resources for your self development you will have to look options to move on.
To sum up, it’s not the place, it’s the notion which is more important according to me. Things may not bring fruitful results initially, but no success comes without handwork and determination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71278157828 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4042954508 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.636363636 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102257364921 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354599465173 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028285666515 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054373113661 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370644541865 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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