Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries.
Why is this happening?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Never has traveling been a so common activity among people as it is now. While the motivations behind this experience are varied, I believe that it is utterly positive for society because it brings a number of benefits.
People pay a visit to other countries for many reasons. Firstly, when their standards of life increase in correspondence with their income, traveling seems to be a good source of pastime to spend holidays. It is not unknown, for example, that traveling to degust expensive food is many celebrities’ and businessmen’s favorite hobby. Secondly, traveling is a golden opportunity for people to explore unique and untouched parts of the world; it is full of ancient civilizations, mysteries, natural beauties that lure people. From my personal experience, my visit to the Grand Canyon has fueled my desire to see the Niagara Falls. Finally, there might be a medical motive behind people’s travels. Because of the limited medical expertise to cure certain illnesses, for instance, people have no choice but to travel to other countries to remedy their situation.
I believe that this experience is fully positive for the society for several reasons. Initially, people’s familiarity with other cultures’ traditions and norms of behavior make them more readily accept differences and become less prejudiced; say, by acknowledging different styles of clothes. In addition to this, having made a visit to wonderful places in the world, tourists will live with lasting impressions about them for the rest of their lives. Ultimately, this traveling allows patients to take advantage of advanced healthcare. Because of these advantages, despite the huge expenses involved, I think traveling is a positive development for society.
In conclusion, not only do people travel for personal reasons, but also for health reasons. In my opinion, this is a wholly positive development due to the benefits mentioned above.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or the rest of their lives. Ultimately, this traveling allows patients to take advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38486842105 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98170603796 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5013605831 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274534432439 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957585946789 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566340217599 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174583080123 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180233900575 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or the rest of their lives. Ultimately, this traveling allows patients to take advan...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38486842105 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98170603796 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5013605831 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274534432439 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957585946789 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566340217599 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174583080123 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180233900575 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.